Story

My friend and I wrote are writing a chain story. This is my part, this is the begining.

I walked into the entrace of Horace Milton Junior High. I stared at all the new people. All the kids here looked different from the kids at my old private school in Virginia. I looked down at the piece of paper my mom gave me from the school. It read:
Mckenzie Brown Grade 8 Homeroon: Dawson Locker 17 Combo 56-32-8. I glanced up and there was somebody staring right at me. She looked like one of those preppy cheerleader girls you saw in movies. "Are you Mckenzie Brown?" she asked. I answered quickly, " Uh, yah. What's you name." "I'm Brittany, and welcome the Horace Milton! Come with me to the bathroom so I can introduce you to some other girls. We'll be BFFS!" I was suprised at how nice she was to me, cheerleaders in movies are usually mean. I followed her the the girl's room. When I went in the room a bunch of girls with mean looks on their face stared at me coldly. "Ok, get ahead" Brittany told the girls. The biggest one gave Brittany twenty bucks while the others girls we coming at me. "Ummm...Brittany, what about being Bffs? And why do these girls look mad?" She snickered and answered. "Oh, I just pretend to be a greeter for new studnets but then give them to Macy and her friends and get money for it. It all works out." She flipped her hair and left. I lookest at the girl who I was pretty sure was Macy. She was wearing a lot of make-up, ripped pants, and a t-shirt with a some strage band name on it. I didn't think my first day was going to start well.